Please Excuse Me

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    Please Excuse Me

     Please excuse me for I am lame,
    I have no feeling and people hate me,
    I also don't like my life that much for
    I don't even know who to be.

    For, myself is boring,
    I am a shame,
    I know that my poetry stinks,
    And I know that it is lame.

    I don't want to show my face,
    For if I do, there will be a disgrace.

    I don't want to cry but I have to,
    My sister hates me and probably you.

    To I don't desereve to live anymore,
    please tell me to leave,
    I won't cry with feelings hurt,
    for I know things are like feelings free.

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    bigred commented on Please Excuse Me

    09-28-2010

    Not quite sure what this poem is suppossed to mean, nor do I get it's intent. But what I do get is that you unfortunately are not a happy person. Sorry this just does not make sense to me.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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