Cold and Broken

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    Cold and Broken
    I used to lay here
    Cold and broken with a tear stained face
    With cuts all down my arms

    The thoughts of him consumed me.
    I got lost in something i never should have been lost in
    I did everything i ever could.

    Now I lay here slowly healing.
    Your arms around me pulling me closer into your embrace.
    No more tears. No more cuts.

    Your giving me something i've never had.
    You treat me like im real. You love me for me
    You do not judge me

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    bforibus commented on Cold and Broken

    01-21-2009

    its cool to feel healed, but when you place the medicine in the hands of another, instead of the hands of yourself. the chances of being broken are always high. other then that this poem is very black and yellow. i loved it
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    lonewolf commented on Cold and Broken

    01-18-2009

    very nice. i'm at a loss for words. the emotions shown is wonderful
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    KJULEST commented on Cold and Broken

    01-18-2009

    You gave me chills, I truly felt this one. Great poem
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    beautifuldeath commented on Cold and Broken

    01-18-2009

    even though I know you are not speaking of me. know that I will never judge you. I love you for everything that you are and everything that you will be.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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