The Salvation.

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    The Salvation.

    You
    You were there to crush my dreams.
    You were there to hear my screams.
    Yet some how I
    Still fell in love with you.

    You
    You were there to make me cry.
    You were there to say good-bye.
    You
    You were there to break me down.
    You were there but never around.
    Yet some how I
    Still fell in love with you

    You
    You were there to make me fall.
    You were there to consume it all.
    But the salvation I found
    Was always in you.

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    lonewolf commented on The Salvation.

    03-17-2009

    absolutely fantastic poem. Sweet, I love the emotions you put into all your poems. Wish you would write and post more often.

    magati commented on The Salvation.

    02-16-2009

    now you r growing in words and reaching deeper...keep going..just around the corner you will find it....good piece

    KJULEST commented on The Salvation.

    02-04-2009

    Nice work Sweet. I hope one day you will no longer be hurt by him...

    beautifuldeath commented on The Salvation.

    01-30-2009

    this has always been one of my favorites. love you

    Vincent commented on The Salvation.

    01-22-2009

    (GP) smiles Vincent

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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