Creation

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Creation

I just opened my eyes, im screaming loudly with cries,
I cant see, everything’s blurry to me-
My lungs are so tight, I just came from the dark, why things are so bright-
Im coughing and choking, blood running down in a watery motion-
Im kicking and screaming, who are these people im seeing-
What is that object they using to cut and fix me,
When am I going back to my home that bliss me-
Who is this person in front of me that’s blurry, my eye tricks me-
If I never return to my home, I want to let the next person that lives there to know, be careful cuz things are risky-
They fixing me up, cleaning me down, I guess my old place is leaving me now-
Everything’s clearing; I don’t understand language im hearing-
People are just staring at me, smiling at me, its obvious there happy-
Ok, now what is this you wrap me with, I don’t understand these people and there happiness-
They lay me down next to this beautiful person that lay-
It was my mother, and this is how I was born that day-

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Radeyah commented on Creation

06-03-2009

that was so beautiful! I'm truly at a lost for words. that was the sweetest thing ive ever read it truly touched my heart.

troy30344

06/06/2009

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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