Thinking about her!

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    Thinking about her!


    When were together its conditional-
    When were not, girl im really missing u-
    i see u, an my face shine bright like the stars up above-
    Me without u is like Micheal Jackson wit out his glove-
    Other girls try to hola, but its only u im thinking about-
    i can see this shit lasting forever, without a doubt-
    All these fake relationships, not goin happen wit us-
    Glad i finally found someone i can trust-
    im sitting here looking at this picture with a heart in the sky-
    i did that myself!-
    oh, u didnt know i can fly!-
    i bet people goin comment this an say' oh he telling jokes, whats wrong wit this guy'!
    but see thats the thing right there-
    we joke, we laugh, aint shit stopping us from wat we have-
    we dont have to look out for nobody but ourselves-
    me and u are giants and the rest are elfs-
    you got my heart beating hard like a drum set-
    got all these other couples looking stupid like dumb checks-
    when we kiss outside i hope it rain that day-
    Matter fact i hope that shit happen soon i say-
    Cause thinking bout them lips!, yup they soft like fur.-
    damn! this only 2 percent of the shit..............WHEN IM THINKING ABOUT HER!!!!!!!!


    for those who dont know! i just freestyle this shit. never wrote it down at all.

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    Nataly commented on Thinking about her!

    10-13-2009

    awww this is really nice and its amazing how deep you feel for this girl. you dont often find guys your age who are so open with there emotions. beauitful keep it up.

    FatalDesire commented on Thinking about her!

    06-27-2009

    Good poem, very sweet. I especially liked the line about giants and elfs. Keep up the good work!

    Miriam commented on Thinking about her!

    06-23-2009

    all your poems are so beutiful and deep. They seem so real

    Radeyah commented on Thinking about her!

    06-03-2009

    your really good i enjoyed reading your poerty. Everything just seems to flow together. Its really hot!!

    troy30344

    06/06/2009

    Thanks alot and I'm greatful For your comments! I will put more up very soon!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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