Thinking about her part 2

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    Thinking about her part 2

    Thinking about her is not even how I should say it-
    Thinking about her is like watching your favorite movie; I’m always trying to play it-
    It’s like dreaming-
    But its not that-
    In a dream nothing is real…… and I ain’t about that-
    Her heart has got me caught like a mouse trap-
    Then we got these haters listening in like a phone tap-

    Things have changed for the both of us-
    That rainy day matured the both of us-
    That’s why we are going to last forever-
    We look like diamonds in the snow when we are together-
    Just beautiful-
    Girl that’s what you are-
    I can’t stop staring at you, like looking at the brightest star-

    On April 15, that changed my whole life-
    You’re the best thing ever-
    Never know……. in the future! you could be my wife-
    Well let me bring this back to the present time-
    Just thinking about her gives me a pleasant mind-
    Tell you the truth I never had a girl like this before-
    You show me love twice as they ever did and more-

    So that’s why ima treat you like a queen, like you’re the number one player of the team-
    When we kiss, its addicting like a fiend for nicotine-
    Having a girl like you was always my dream-

    Feeling this way is not something I do-
    MI-MI…..everything I say is LOVE when I’m thinking about you…….. ;)

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    cupcakecutie15 commented on Thinking about her part 2

    11-15-2009

    I really like this one(: Keep it up and you should read my poem cause I would really appreciate it! Plus, this is my first time being on Originalpoetry.com too. It's nice cause I like to express my feelings.

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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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