Crystal Eyes (about a girl named Crystal)

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    Crystal Eyes (about a girl named Crystal)

    Oh crystal eyes, what Crystal see's
    is silence talking real?
    when Crystal grows than Crystal knows
    that blue eyes breaths and feels

    So Crystal why? no, Crystal cry
    a necklace made for me
    a diamond rock, I long a lot
    but thats not how it should be

    It's soon, its slow, its way down low
    where dwellers lurk and gaze
    at the diamond hole where Crystal know
    to send love to it's grave

    but her heart is soft so when she cough
    her love drift far and wide
    don't catch her disease love is far to free
    but will debt no doubt in time

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    stiches commented on Crystal Eyes (about a girl named Crystal)

    06-29-2009

    intersting good flow and it seems that you have an out look on love that is your own

    DeepEclipse commented on Crystal Eyes (about a girl named Crystal)

    04-13-2009

    Smooth rhyme flow. It all worked in step. Had a medieval-language feel to it...

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