Rejection

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    Rejection

    Well of course the fox she looked her best
    I counted sheep to stay at rest
    a false assumption, one true test

    and though I dwell in constant hell
    "the look" despised the wishing well
    oh, why I feel? no one can tell

    a sappy tale but with no fairy
    led a dream that started scary
    and ended sweet, a moral barley

    Oh why I feel? I'll never know
    an endless though, a constant glow
    that chains the life to make it slow

    the fox she praises where she prays
    a shallow deep inside her haze
    yet I still watch in constant gaze

    so what I've learned is what I've lost
    a simple lesson to be taught
    that need not come at any cost

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    stiches commented on Rejection

    06-29-2009

    i am getting this you dig a chick or you think you dig a chick and your having a hard time fuigaring out what is going on in the heart but less paine or none

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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