False Love for the hopeless romantic

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    False Love for the hopeless romantic
    Well first of all I always fall
    that simply is a fact
    before I start my story
    just know false love is like crack

    I saw her after months of time
    and knew not what to say
    I felt that her body was mine
    I've never felt that way

    If only I could hold her close
    and kiss her on the floor
    I've never ever found someone
    I felt that way before

    No this girl does not need to try
    just stand there in a stare
    smile like you've always done
    with eye's so bright and fair

    Oh! she'll never ever love me
    only God and I could tell
    I just thought I'd tell the story of
    the perfect way I fell

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    DeepEclipse commented on False Love for the hopeless romantic

    04-14-2009

    Once again, your rhyme is right on time. There seems to be room for more on this piece. Just my opinion.
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