Dancing Skys

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    • corath
    • I don't write in structure. I don't write often. I write when and how I feel.

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    Tornadoes are nasty and fill everyone in their path with a fear unknown to most.

    Dancing Skys
    Terror grips my heart as the sky comes down
    Its coming to dance but we dont want you.
    Go far from them harm non.
    My beloved to far to hold to me. 
    When the morning light breaks through will I ever see you?
    Will the dancing sky remove you from my light?
    Dancing sky go far from my love and leave all in peace.
    Terror grips my heart as the skys come down.
     It's coming to dance but we don't want you!
    Go far from them, harm non!
     My beloved to far to hold to me.
     When the morning light breaks through this night,
    Will I ever see you?
    Will the dancing skys remove from my light? 
    Dancing sky go far from my love  and leave all in peace!

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    fliikidd2189 commented on Dancing Skys

    05-25-2011

    nyce... checc my poems tell me wat yu thnkbe honest
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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