dead or alive?

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    dead or alive?
    i heard...
    footsteps behind me
    screams a mile away
    a heart beat in my chest
    but all i feel
    is pain
    water dripping from a fossit
    thunder above the roof
     i thought i was dead
    before i felt blood
    dripping from my head

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    redbloodink commented on dead or alive?

    03-21-2010

    intense......................................................................... red
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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