maybe a virgin...maybe not...

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  • Sadness
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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Anger
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  • Confusion

    maybe a virgin...maybe not...
    you wanted a poem
    so why didnt you just rip me open
    and read my heart?
    thank god i didnt fall in love with you!
    you asked me on a date
    why'd i say yes?!?!
     because i thought that maybe you would be different.
     you took advantage of me in so many ways.
     the confusion about my virginity...
    its all your fault.
    you said damn what a nice body!!
    but you didnt even notice my laugh or my lips.
    you pushed me away
    now dont try to pull me back in!

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    kpeery09 commented on maybe a virgin...maybe not...

    03-21-2010

    Very Nice, I like it alot, I can sense the emotions running through the flow of the poem, but it made a very nice read.
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    alb29oclfl commented on maybe a virgin...maybe not...

    03-20-2010

    well expressed.......................................................................
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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