hes the same as the others

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    hes the same as the others
    your that one guy i was stupid to trust.
     you've got my heart
    tied in a knot
    and my tummy
    in a whirl.
     i wish you were down to love me.
    tell me not to worry.
    you were supposed to never hurt me..
    you pinky promised!
     its not that i regret any time we spent together,
    honestly id do it all over again.
    its just that the way it happened
    wasn't the fairy tail ending
    that i was expecting   =[

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    charmlessman2d commented on hes the same as the others

    03-21-2010

    if only pinky promises could hold real weight. I too believed it could. but i love the sentiment of your piece here.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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