Dead Profound

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    Dead Profound

    Prove your apathy,

    I'm the premise,

    Selfish to the core,

    An insane chemist.

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    ginga commented on Dead Profound

    01-06-2011

    HA! I always knew I loved male scientists for a reason! Clever. ginga
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    tenderpoison commented on Dead Profound

    01-05-2011

    lol...this was a fun bit of self-indulgence, wasn't it? makes us think though - and poetry should do that...
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Dead Profound

    01-04-2011

    You have rhyme and metaphore which you tie into intepretation for the reader to decide.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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