Getting Through

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A peice with haunting eloquence.

Getting Through

 

"I want to be where you are"

"But you are"

Whispers through static currents,

Pondering the chemistry, of us,

In solitude a prayer to you,

Through layers, indifferent attitudes,

Love ministered, me wandering,

Endured frantic prayers,

Static currents whisper through:

"We're rare"

and "Your where I want to be"

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Teardrops commented on Getting Through

01-03-2011

a cry to be accepted great write and haunting in a way Marie

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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