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    Fashioning a disguise from temporary goodbyes,

    Visited my funeral today, caught a glimpse of you, then walked away.

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    MindNumbing commented on Saved

    01-07-2011

    I'm fascinated by this and the power that's packed into these two short lines. Sometimes brevity is best, and this is a perfect example. Nicely done.
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    ginga commented on Saved

    01-06-2011

    Certainly a dark yet evocative poem. I like the mood of this one,. ginga
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    catharss101

    01/06/2011

    that you for visiting :)

    tenderpoison commented on Saved

    01-05-2011

    just checking huh? clever. very brief - but it lingers.
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Saved

    01-04-2011

    I like how the metaphore plays out through your words. It can mean more than one thing or be taken in more than one way.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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