DEVOTION

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DEVOTION

I wouldn't be here if I didn't wanna see you
the best thing on the other side of this window that I see thru

I've been told that I'm a stand up guy that'll do the right thing
and the right thing is you; just imagine what that might bring -

to the table, to your life, to the kids as well
because you're what I've been looking for; You're cool as hell

Damn, an oxymoron, hell's not cold
especially since you're hot; if you think I'm lying, that's not so

The first one in my heart, no one else there
My heart is in the right place but, my head is elsewhere

Hey now, that's not what i meant, get your mind outta the gutter
from the heart I'm spittin' kindness without hesitation or a stutter

I've got the goods and you're the recipe for the perfect mixture
you know I like to build, I'll be your permanent fixture

were you sent here to be the solution to my equation?
I look at you and I see more than just persuasion

So, where is the confusion? what other reason would I say this
i'll have love for you whether i'm broke or rich & famous

Go for what you want and don't consider holding back
if you do all you can just to make the moments last

I'm tryin' to hold you tight like a crap during PMS
I want you to be my last, don't give a damn about the next

You ask how I feel, well, here is my rebuttal
you're everything to me, there's no point in being subtle

You should be told that everyday that I'm fortunate to be with you
If my devotion is in question that should never be an issue....


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Kdaddy commented on DEVOTION

09-16-2009

Beautiful and heartfelt. I enjoyed this read. Good poem.

16k

09/16/2009

THANX!!!

Tempy commented on DEVOTION

09-16-2009

were you sent here to be the solution to my equation? I look at you and I see more than just persuasion loved it

16k

09/16/2009

THANK U!!! VERY MUCH LOL

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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WHEN YOU KNOW YOU'RE IN LOVE 1
Would you still....? 0
THINK pt. 1 0
DEVOTION 2
Power of 3 1
ONE NIGHT 1
I Kill Myself 2
It's All on You 0
Let Us Pray (Father, forgive me) 2
Simple Things 0
If I Never Get the Chance 2
Inside 1
Making Love to You 10
The Way of the World 0
Questions of Appreciation 1