ONE NIGHT

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    ONE NIGHT

    One Night

    If I could have one night to marvel at your radiant beauty
    I would make love to you and make it my only duty

    Remove your clothing even though you're looking like a model
    My soul craves you, while inside I'm feeling hollow

    Fill me up as I fill you up and feel you up
    Gasping for air as if in a Ziploc to seal you up -

    In all of the rapture that we will be caught up
    in a world that's compelling in ways you've never thought of

    Come close for a kiss as sensations run through you
    Certain things play in my mind when it comes to you

    Like, I wouldn't leave your side; not even in a crisis
    For me to have you, the honor should come with a license

    You're that deep. So, how deep will I go?
    Deep enough, to the point where this thing of ours will grow

    I wonder, if ever, has someone truly shown you how special you are?
    Expressed what you really mean to them without going to far?

    If not, let me be the first to show you what's so nice about you
    Give me that one night. I don't like those nights without you....

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    BlacknWhite commented on ONE NIGHT

    08-10-2009

    I like the direction of this poem. You sort of pinpointed what I would like to find in a man. The last two lines really grabbed me. Good job!!

    16k

    08/20/2009

    THANK YOU!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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