Dont leave

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    Dont leave

    I can almost feel the pain

    In this evening sunrise

    There is a ray of sunlight

    That makes me glance into your eyes

    I begin to cry

    Because I made u leave

    I wipe my eyes with my sleeve

    And ask for a chance to redeem

    My only idée is for u too love me

    Please don’t leave

    And just hold me

    It will never end for u and me
    -Tineessa-

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    nonners commented on Dont leave

    10-19-2009

    aww the throes of young love. was a super read well written
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    Tineessa

    10/19/2009

    aww thanxs :)

    backspace commented on Dont leave

    10-10-2009

    this poem was real nice i could feel her pain and her love.but i learned long time ago love hurt bad
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    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    Thanxs, and yeah it does!!!

    HopeOhlarik commented on Dont leave

    10-10-2009

    very well written. You did a awesome job with saying so little at the same time. well done!
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    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    Thank you, urs were well wriiten too :-)

    koolmom0 commented on Dont leave

    10-10-2009

    What a beautiful confession of love hun. Thank you for sharing. Love Koolmom
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    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    thank you :) ur welcome thank u for reading and expressing ur feelings to in ur poetry!!! :)

    OutcastAmber commented on Dont leave

    10-10-2009

    That was really good. I like the In the evening sunrise part it was very good
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    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    thank you, i loved ur poems also!!! :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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