moment

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moment

Moments in are lives can
open are eyes
enough to relize
who hide and despise
there eyes
bring them to relize
there moments of pride
is a ride or surprise
that never dies.

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Teardrops commented on moment

11-30-2009

you are so right and say it so wonderfully great poem and you should keep on writing

onyxprince commented on moment

05-24-2009

I love this. You explained a deep most heartfelt discussion in very few words. Wonderful ready sweetheart.

Tineessa

07/13/2009

Thank you, i liked urs also. :D

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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