moment
Moments in are lives canopen are eyes
enough to relize
who hide and despise
there eyes
bring them to relize
there moments of pride
is a ride or surprise
that never dies.
moment
2 Comments
- Tineessa
- is drinking vitimin water yumm!
open are eyes
enough to relize
who hide and despise
there eyes
bring them to relize
there moments of pride
is a ride or surprise
that never dies.
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Poem Comments
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11-30-2009
- you are so right and say it so wonderfully great poem and you should keep on writing
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onyxprince commented on moment
05-24-2009
- I love this. You explained a deep most heartfelt discussion in very few words. Wonderful ready sweetheart.
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07/13/2009
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