LOVE

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    LOVE
    I love you more than the univirse can hold
    I love you more than the world knows
    My words for you can't show
    because there is no word in are world
    I feel so many things
    My heart has never taken
    but all i know is
    my heart is taken by you
    and im in love with YOU!

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    Mandi commented on LOVE

    10-10-2009

    whoever you wrote this for should be extremely flattered you did nice job
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    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    ty mandi :)

    Tineessa

    10/10/2009

    ty mandi :)

    MochaT commented on LOVE

    09-12-2009

    Nice poem, I look forward to reading more. I also liked friendship
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    Tineessa

    09/12/2009

    Thank you im glad u liked them i loved urs too!!!

    Deepbeauty17 commented on LOVE

    08-23-2009

    Love the peom, it stands out but is simple and thats y i like it
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    Tineessa

    08/23/2009

    thank you very much i loved ur poems i read them all! they were great

    photochick commented on LOVE

    08-19-2009

    love a great thing to write about and something that all can relate to nice way of playing with your words and moving them around within your poem look forward to reading more of your work and watching your talent grow while your on the site thanks for sharing
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    Tineessa

    08/19/2009

    thank you and i agree, i will be sure to read yours as well! :D

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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