Days

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Are days on earth as human beings.

Days

Today is the day
we take a step
to acheive are list for the day
we may drempt this day
but we will fight in that day
we will make mistakes
we will make are choices
but are days make everyday no other day.
-Tineessa-

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bforibus commented on Days

07-13-2009

it was a strong decleration of mandatory. i love the circle and loops of words. it went into contradicting itself but that was hot too. good job

Tineessa

07/13/2009

Thank u, urs are amazing. :D

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

Tineessa’s Poems (13)

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Lust By Thy Beauty 0
Sorry 0
MY GRATTITUDE 2
Dont leave 5
LOVE 5
Friendship 1
Poetry 1
Days 1
Happiness 0
Moment 2 0
GRAVITY 0
moment 2
The moments in are lives. 0