Dreams of you

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    Dreams of you

    The sun is shinning on everything, except my life. Dreams of you through the night. Why did you go, what are you doing? Miss you so much, I ain't foolin'. Chasing a rainbow, through thick and thin. Watching the river flow until it's end. As it spills into the sea,sitting on shore wondering why it's all a mystery. Where is the beginning, where is the end? Or should i know my friend. Please tell me why it had to be this way, anything is possible so they say. Thinking of you all the time, I'm just glad you were mine for a little while.

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    jademelissa74 commented on Dreams of you

    06-19-2009

    The feeling of loss is felt whin this piece. The imagery that you have portrayed is vivid and full of life, yet, there is an abyss that holds truth. Accepting that someone is gone is hard but it suddenly becomes sweeter to know that you were blessed with thei presence even if only for a short while! Great poem! Thank you for sharing!

    deadmanbay

    06/23/2009

    Thanks for your kind words!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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