Everyone's a Critique
everybody looks at me and thinks I should be sad.
But I don't care what they think, I'm not feeling bad.
Yes I know that he is gone.
I won't cry and wine and moan.
When I think of him I have to smile.
Then I talk about him for a while.
People always ask, "Why don't you cry?"
and I just have to ask them, "Why?"
He was never sad, but was always happy.
So even though he died, why can't I be?
Everyone just has to be a critic,
and have to tell me all this shit.
I can do this one my own,
why don't you just leave me alone?
Try to rate me one more time,
and you won't ever see that sun shine.
I don't like being told what to do,
so you can go cry, "boo hoo".
try to rate me again,
you won't know how to count from 1 to 10.
I am not a movie to see,
I am not going to be anyone but me!
I am not some book to be read.
You must have something wrong with your head!
You ask me why I am so angry,
you ask me why I am so mad.
You ask me why I just don't cry,
and all I have to say is, "You're dumb critics, that's why!"
But I don't care what they think, I'm not feeling bad.
Yes I know that he is gone.
I won't cry and wine and moan.
When I think of him I have to smile.
Then I talk about him for a while.
People always ask, "Why don't you cry?"
and I just have to ask them, "Why?"
He was never sad, but was always happy.
So even though he died, why can't I be?
Everyone just has to be a critic,
and have to tell me all this shit.
I can do this one my own,
why don't you just leave me alone?
Try to rate me one more time,
and you won't ever see that sun shine.
I don't like being told what to do,
so you can go cry, "boo hoo".
try to rate me again,
you won't know how to count from 1 to 10.
I am not a movie to see,
I am not going to be anyone but me!
I am not some book to be read.
You must have something wrong with your head!
You ask me why I am so angry,
you ask me why I am so mad.
You ask me why I just don't cry,
and all I have to say is, "You're dumb critics, that's why!"
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