Everytime You Write On Me

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Everytime You Write On Me

6-20-09

Whenever You Write On Me

I feel it inside of me
You shine a light on me
I give you all of me
I can hear you calling me
It's where I want to be

Accept my apology
It bothers me
That I don't know what I want to be
All I have to offer you is all of me
Probably is not enough for a queen to be

I want to give you everything
Always-something new to bring
Security and diamond rings
This goes with everything
A song to sing, a wish a dream

I'm imaging something never seen
Every word I mean
If I were a king
I already found my queen
Every day is like a dream

You are reminding me
Every time you write on me
Your right beside of me
You are exciting me
You have all of me

This is the start of me
Its not hard to see
What you make me want to be
So follow me
Into this Love Story

Starring you and me
This is what I see
Everytime you write on me
Please never set me free
Believe in Me  

By Jamie R. Berumen

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JadedJezzabel commented on Everytime You Write On Me

06-21-2009

I'M ASSUMING THE OBJECT OF YOUR DESIRE IS ALSO YOUR TATTOO ARTIST.....IF SO I AM GREEN WITH ENVY......TATTOOS ARE SO SEXUALLY AND EMOTIONALLY INTERWOVEN THAT ITS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO NOT BE ATTRACTED TO THE ARTIST.....GREAT POEM

CarlaAnn commented on Everytime You Write On Me

06-20-2009

very cute poem. well wrote. i like it. seems like you have a strong devotion to your loved one. congratulations

jbbuzn

06/20/2009

Thanks for your comment

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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