You I wont let go

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    You I wont let go

     You I wont let go

    Even though you’re no longer here,
    I wonder,
    Do you still feel my breath beside your ear?
    You I will always hold tight,
    Our memories always hold dear.
    Silently you’re here with me,
    inside me,
    You’re right in front of me when iI see my soul in the mirror.
    I cross my heart,
    and hope to die,
    unable to erase these tears I cry.
    How could something so right end up so wrong?
    Searching for my place in a space I don’t belong.
    I try to be strong,
    pick up move on.
    Convincing them this way’s for the better,
    yet forever I’m pretending
    Because those heart strings wont be severed.

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    CarlaAnn commented on You I wont let go

    07-14-2009

    loved this poem. very sincere. good job and look forward to reading more
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    geminiSoFYE commented on You I wont let go

    06-26-2009

    This is beautiful and you are write with alot of emotion. i see you guys can have a soft side for love and stilll be strong & powerful at the same side. Good work!!
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    tenderpoison commented on You I wont let go

    06-24-2009

    loss is always hard, sometimes devastating..especially when we have to pretend otherwise
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    jbbuzn

    06/24/2009

    your words are very true thanks for the comment

    jbbuzn

    06/24/2009

    your words are very true thanks for the comment

    JadedJezzabel commented on You I wont let go

    06-21-2009

    NICE TRIBUTE TO ONE WHO YOU OBVIOUSLY FELT VERY DEEPLY ABOUT....IT SUCKS WHEN YOU HAVE TO ACT LIKE ITS ALL OK WHEN ITS NOT
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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