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  • Lost Love

    Fade

     



    Your memory 
    can still my soul
    This windy day
    becomes so cold

    The warmth of you
    fades away
    and all my thoughts
    beg to stay

    The song you sang,
    "lover's score"
    I cannot hear
    anymore

    Know you have graced
    these eyes
    Forever changed
    my life

    I see beauty
    in all I'm shown
    A fallen leaf
    the tree has grown

    Once in my future
    now a part of the past
    Though seasons will fade
    the memories will last

     



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    MarionYost commented on Fade

    11-14-2010

    This is a beautiful poem Artie. Sad, The emotions are almost painfully vivid on this. great flow as well. All the best -Marion-

    Musicmynded1 commented on Fade

    08-24-2010

    Nice Artie... nice... just letting you know that i'm around, reading and writing... miss talking movies wit cha

    Rhymer commented on Fade

    07-31-2010

    The love and memories of the one you love captured so well in this write. Excellent job my friend.

    devaamido commented on Fade

    07-18-2010

    Artie, does my "tin ear" deceive me or is your style changing? This is a well done, soft, pensive paean to lost a love. Truly touching.

    Artie

    07/18/2010

    Your ear serves you well my friend! lol - Lately I have been stepping outside the normal area. Rather than fight it, I dive in head first and swim. I'm glad you enjoyed this. This was a very serious write for me. Thx for stoppin by - Latrz

    stellar commented on Fade

    07-16-2010

    poem such as this is my favorite....poems about memories and the way you execute it with restraint and the wonderful imagery leaves a deep imprint to the mind...I love it artie...^_^ v

    Artie

    07/18/2010

    I agree with you. Pieces that look into the past are so intriguing to me as well because the past is where we learn from. Thx for the read - Latrz

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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