More Of You

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    More Of You




    Lying beside each other in silence
    A gentle breeze gives a chill
    Scattered stars like pinholes in the sky
    images, moments, and life,
    slowly drift by


    Your breath against my skin 
    conquers and rejuvenates me
    like a crashing wave so strong,
    flooding my thoughts with visions of you
    leaving me enslaved to the siren's song


    One touch of your hand
    I fall in defeat
    One word from your lips
    I'm deaf to all others
    One taste of your skin
    I'm intoxicated with lust
    One look at your beauty
    and my eyes can hold no more


    You are every
    You are all
    You are the only
    You are within


    Because of you
    I feel the passion created
    when love is found,

    I want to scream out your name
    and bathe in the beauty
    of the echoing sound.



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    ApaqRasgirl commented on More Of You

    09-11-2010

    wow, Artie, that was truly a hot passionate write, so filled with the desire to have what you love so dear.....wonderful read, "I'm intoxicated with lust One look at your beauty and my eyes can hold no more" wonderful loved this part alot......thanks for the great read.....love asha

    Artie

    09/11/2010

    Thank you- I'm glad you enjoyed this

    Embraced commented on More Of You

    09-11-2010

    It is the best feeling in the world to express your inner soul to another and get feed back on it. All of the honesty in your work is wonderful. Thank you. E~

    Artie

    09/11/2010

    You are so correct - thank you for taking the time to read my work

    ImStillHere commented on More Of You

    09-10-2010

    wow Artie. the third stanza really got my attention, showing how the subject is so completely enthralled... very good structure and an even better write as a whole :) 10 for me. ~Audrey

    Artie

    09/11/2010

    Thanks Audrey. I'm glad you enjoyed this

    JadedJezzabel commented on More Of You

    07-31-2010

    I had to hold my breath all the way through reading this dear Artie.........this is exceptional. this would make an awsome song with a slow blues beat.......love this line the best....You are every You are all You are the only You are within

    wamomo commented on More Of You

    03-27-2010

    ...So much tenderness and passion intertwined...this one is going in to my favorites...Fantastic write!! I will be reading this one many more times... 10 from me...Blessings ~ Wamomo

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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