Faithful Lilting Melody

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    Faithful Lilting Melody
    Oh thank you ever so
    Forgive me to allow myself
    Gold evening placid
    Warm in spring late

    Smile free satyr
    You have given me joyful nails
    Positively charged jewel hammer
    Your disappointing discourse carries

    Stroke the broken pitiful
    The woeful beaded brow
    The fragile exoskeleton identity
    Fetal in the warehouse covered

    Look back at this I will and say
    That every wasted day awash
    Adrift beyond Lake Erie shores
    Was yours.

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    FindingJune commented on Faithful Lilting Melody

    10-02-2009

    I have read several of your poems. Your style, and voice are quite unique. Refreshing to find here amongst cliche and scribble.
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    cousinsoren commented on Faithful Lilting Melody

    03-04-2009

    GOOD GOD!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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