Falling

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    Falling

    i feel no pain but yet i see blood
    too many turns with no directions
    6 billion people yet i feel no love
    every one turned down with no discretion

    i feel that we all are victims to society
    souls begging for mercy
    surrounded by things we can't explain
    mind full of theories
    that triggers many critics
    so we are quick to judge
    but refuse to stand down
    so i must bow to such and such

    inside i feel anger and i don't know why
    but you can't feel sorry for me
    you can just imagine

    imagine a time in place
    imagine your face on your favorite magazine
    imagine the wonders we can't see
    lost worlds death ears not enough words
    lost vocabulary to acient times
    great minds with no will left behind

    useless careless my mother called me
    and i took it for granted
    the reason we streesing is that we only
    care for what we spare
    nobody dares to be the outsider
    so i'll be in the inside looking out
    maybe even looking down
    my children we are still young
    we are still evolving
    but though the valleys of depth
    we are falling






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    Karma885 commented on Falling

    04-09-2009

    THIS POEM IS REAL TALK. I LIKED IT ..IT SPEAKS THE TRUTH. PRETTY DEEP AND ALOTA MEANING TO U. THE STORY OF YOUR LIFE RIGHT LOL..I WANTED TO COME BY AND SHARE SOME LOVE

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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