Fascinating!!

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Fascinating!!

Her big beautiful eyes do an endless talk,
'Brown eyed goddess' she is mocked.
Bright white jewel on her nose,
Chubby cheeks and lips red as rose.
Dark hair hanging on her forehead loose,
Catch my eye and make me amused.
Excitement flows in every blood drop of hers
Which also gets my attention lured.
Like a small kid, lot of eagerness she has got.
Was I waiting for this girl that I sought?
Her wide smile sparkles bright
And gives me hope in my dark nights.
But alas! A love she has & she loves him more.
So I can just wait at a distance and adore her.
I guess she is one of those faraway things
At which I'll just get to look 'n say "Fascinating!!"

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Helios commented on Fascinating!!

08-06-2009

Bravo, just simply bravo. I will probably recommend my friends to this poem. If you have time, please read my sonnets and give me your advise.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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