The Angel

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    The Angel

    I was walking alone in the cold dark night,
    The winds blowing hard, no one in sight.
    I was tired and afraid to go on,
    Thought that there'd never be a dawn.
    Just then came an angel out of the sky,
    To hold my hand when I was about to cry.
    She gave me courage to make it through.
    By her company I had no time's clue.
    Soon emerged the clear blue skies,
    With the angel I had made strong ties.
    But then it was time for her to go.
    So I became sad, down and low.
    Now that you've left I have your memory,
    I'll miss you a lot, thanks for helping me.....

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    JayJ420 commented on The Angel

    06-29-2010

    reminds me of all my angels...haha great write....Jay-J

    Tempy commented on The Angel

    12-31-2009

    hey In enjoyed this alot. it flowed so brilliantly. good to see you writing again. keep it up :)

    Platti commented on The Angel

    12-29-2009

    I really enjoyed this poem, there are many people I'm sure that wish they can find that same Angel. :)

    BrittKun commented on The Angel

    12-20-2009

    Great poem!!!! in line 6 I think it should be hand not had? Great flow of words and rhythms. 9 ; )

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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