Please Return.....

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  • Sadness
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  • Longing
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  • Love

    Please Return.....

     So timeless seems this long wait,
    To see the tender face of my mate.
    Hungry are my hopes for your return,
    As the sown seeds wait for the rain's turn.
    Your thoughts have formed a fog in my mind,
    'N for endless moments it remains behind.
    Sorrow does not leave my heart free;
    But still I stand strong like a tall tree.
    The winds don't have any news of your return,
    'N my wait will not be over till you return

    Please return.....

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    BrittKun commented on Please Return.....

    12-20-2009

    I almost cried how sad. : (. Sometimes the waiting is the hardest. Great poem!!! : )
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    1990lh commented on Please Return.....

    08-15-2009

    wow i love this one too i can feel your sorrow, i know one day love will return to you. this is really an amazing poem so powerful and sad, it is just full of emtion, and i also thought the words you used were perfect i agree completely with blue this is a true masterpiece
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    ladyleadfoot commented on Please Return.....

    08-11-2009

    Very deep. I like the fading- to- lost feeling it gave. good work.
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    jesusfreake commented on Please Return.....

    08-11-2009

    Explosive!!!!!!! Amazing this poem is totally fantastic totally true because thats how we all feel at one point in our lives and u did a perfect job of capturing that sorrow....great job, a total masterpiece...like always i give it a 10!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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