First things in mind

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Literally, I wrote whatever came to mind this time. Lots of strange thought appeared and I wrote them. Some of these won't make sense, but it doesn't have to, its the human mind. Also, I can't get this girl off my mind! It's driving me insane, a bit of that is in there.

First things in mind

Go green
Its the right thing
Wrap a holiday gift
Its christmas
I don't want to edit
My profile right now
Maybe later
Rugrats was a good show
I like Reptar
Dude, that's not cool
Your dad shouldn't do that
I can't see my clock
There's stuff in the way
I wish I could play guitar
But it's too late
There was this thing
With eyes on its hands
That was freaky
I spelled a word wrong
Someday I'll be
A PhD
Considering commentary
A beautiful redhead
Not natural though
But still
It's so dark in my room
And I'm up so late
I can't give good advice
I don't notice when she flirts
Or if she cares
That's just me
I don't notice things
I had to ask everyone
What my talents were
I didn't know
I have a mouse on my wall
Plush with a magnet in its back
Horn Creek
Very fine establishment
Fun times there
Another plush mouse
I'm so cold
Piled up in blankets
Shaking all over
I still can't see my clock
A sneeze echoes
Through the house
A light shines from the floor
My phone
Of course
I'm typing very loudly
They'll probably wake up
We don't want that
Last thought
Tattoo
Left shoulder

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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