Flotation Device(Blowfish syndrome)

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    I think this might be one of me first dark poems. As all exist in us it was bound to show itself. Don't be afraid to delve.

    Flotation Device(Blowfish syndrome)

     Hold your breath
    Count to ten
    Rise to the surface
    Peek your head
    meds submerge
    An urge to purge
    yet one suppresses
    those that are meant to be felt
    the unreal melts
    When I asked you for help
    You said "Here take one of these and breathe"

    And you wonder at my rage
    Placed in a pill box cage

    Hold your breath
    Count to ten

    Fuck it.
    I'm counting to the end
    Blowfish Syndrome
    For both yours and my protection.

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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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