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    Original Po
    Poetic
    Expression
    Release
    Beseech beyond
    Catalyst connection
    Criticize
    Various vibes
    Lips slips on the slide
    Can't help it if these words want to ride

    Skip the toll
    Rattle rattle
    CLINK!

    Sink to depths
    Call me Jacque
    Every one panics!
    I love it when the submarine rocks

    Reason
    Why try
    My
    I
    Who
    You
    Why not
    Ok
    Select
    Say
    Spray
    The canvas has space
    Infinite to taste

    Deep Surface
    Would you get mad
    If I told you all was worthless

    eerF!

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    IzzyGumbo commented on Original Po

    05-24-2009

    ahhh I like this one! Nice flow and beat to the words, very lively indeed...........................!
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    abbadejuju

    05/27/2009

    much tnax sis!

    lightcourier commented on Original Po

    05-02-2009

    Dadaistic masterpiece? Liked the clanks and rattles of the language. Makes it come alive! Not public displays of urinals as art though! lol Thanks!
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