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    mirror

     where none became one
    found a playmate in a mirror
    once betrayed
    became afraid
    never to trust myself again.

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    SThomas commented on mirror

    10-23-2009

    Nice...very nice...I had to read it a few times, and found myself reading it again just to get that build up, looking forward to the ending, again and again...
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    abbadejuju

    12/12/2009

    thank you!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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