OLD SOUL

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    OLD SOUL

     Archaic

    Old ass

    Outlast the cast iron exterior
    Inferior to years

    Peers praised the poised youth well before his prime

    A sign of what's to come

    Young

    Accented

    The grey wiskered mister and his sister both concur

    He often likes to visit

    sip tea and play tonk

    watch the personalities

    comments on the weather

    no fuss
    no rush

    As the day slips away
    One can easily tell

    He's been here before

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    cynthiakehl commented on OLD SOUL

    05-26-2009

    love it! a great analogy! outlast the cast iron exterior....great job on this one too! you are truly gifted!!!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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