For Granted

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    For Granted

     I took them for granted today
    I am sorry for that
    I took them for granted today
    I can not take it back
    I screamed and yelled and fussed today
    and broke their little hearts
    I took them for granted today
    I wish I didn't do that
    they did not deserve it
    from the mood that I was in
    I took them for granted today
    because of my imperfect sin  

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    MrGee commented on For Granted

    11-20-2011

    I like the use of aliteration at work. Using few words you paint in good picture in the mind of the reader. an obvious 10
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