Forgetting you

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    Forgetting you

     I got up, this morning;
    and I saw your picture,
    I told my heart,to disenchant;
    "beat slowly else you will rupture"
    Its really really hard,to know;
    What was inside my heart's structure,
    I felt a pain, a bit insane;
    my life looked like a caricature,my easy going life,was in a mess;
    It was not less than a torture,
    It might end soon,like an eclipsed moon,
    My life is having complete fracture!!

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    optimistic commented on Forgetting you

    08-05-2009

    Different style of writing in which I like very painful words expressed emotionally across the page.
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    nangy commented on Forgetting you

    08-05-2009

    its not easy to forget someone who had a huge effect on you. beautifully written showing emotions that one goes through when you lose someone you love....
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    lips_unlocked

    08/09/2009

    thanx

    lips_unlocked

    08/09/2009

    thanx

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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