LOST BATTLE

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    LOST BATTLE

     Cages felt caged,
    Darkness felt afraid of dark,
    Pain was crying of pain,
    & I was trying to hide from myself!!

    Trouble was troubled,
    Deciet was decieved,
    Insomnia lost sleep,
    & I was running from my own dreams!!

    Accusal was accused,
    Hesistancy has been hesistating,
    Disgrace was disgraceful,
    & I wasn't believing my own distress!!

    Lonesome was feeling lonely,
    Fault was proved faulty,
    Dissent has been dissentious,
    & I had no faith in my hopes!!

    Failure was failed,
    Insanity was insane,
    Cries cried on that day,
    & life lost a battle with life itself!!

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    optimistic commented on LOST BATTLE

    08-17-2009

    One self en masse very interesting repeated pattern of unique poem writting good job.
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    DuckieoutaH20 commented on LOST BATTLE

    08-16-2009

    Very heavy, I could relate to the utter flatness.. when everything feels just completely void. There is no hope, no feelings in nothingness...this is how I GET THIS
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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