My life story

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    My life story

    I walk on a straight long path
    A pain came my way,I cried,
    I felt hungry,I ate potatoes deep brown fried,
    I hit some one in my way when I was in wrath,

    I plucked a red hibiscus in my way,
    There was no scent ,I threw it away,
    Then a lily I saw and thought,
    Had I done the same if this scent it had not brought,

    Afraid of a fiercely barking dog,
    I ran through deep intense fog,
    I was tired & started walking slowly,
    In my way to a crying baby I gave away a lolly,

    in the way saw a circus,
    Though I only liked magician chanting "ocuss-pocuss",
    and then came a political rally,
    Everybody was hungry in it from brain to belly,

    I saw a girl and fell in love with her,
    I badly wanted those 3 magical words I swear,
    What I intended to hear I thought I would get,
    And she said "you f*#k off" with absolutely no regret,

    I ran away being humiliated thinking of suicide,
    At the seashore then I observed high tide,
    Leaving a few fishes at the shore to die,
    Taking a lesson I ate that fish and watched american pie,

    And on this path there is still a lot to see,
    Just i have to stop at a few places and pee,
    No fears no regrets and with no expectations i walk
    Writing my story of life with a coloured chalk!!!!!

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    DuckieoutaH20 commented on My life story

    08-16-2009

    I don't think you have any problem with 'english' I wish that I could understand your prose in your native tongue.You translate VERY well.I read your words and I see many colours,not always bright... catch whiff of many different scents, not all aromatic..feel pity that shifts to laughter.. I am glad that you have chosen to unlock, and share these jewels you posses

    lips_unlocked

    08/20/2009

    thanx

    lips_unlocked

    08/20/2009

    thanx

    optimistic commented on My life story

    05-07-2009

    You have a very deep and great talent in you writing you really explained a life story you've had. 10

    lips_unlocked

    05/27/2009

    Thanks for the complement ,Actually I am from INDIA and may not have a good english as urs but I try to do it!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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