My lost love

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    My lost love

    Like a leaf detached from plant,
    today I feel lying in ashes on ground,
    like a palm tree uprooted in storm standing so slant,
    today I feel so purposeless yet having so much to expound;

    It was all due to my insecurity for my love,
    and now that I have lost her I feel like a wingless dove,
    I hurt her once ,twice and thrice,
    and took it for granted that she will be nice,

    But now I don't know if I can get her back,
    I accuse myself,curse and several times attack,
    But she hates me a lot that's a fact,
    and in my heart her love is still so intact!!!

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    optimistic commented on My lost love

    05-06-2009

    Great poem nice use of word and metaphors

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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