Foster Child's Poem

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    Foster Child's Poem

    Why did you send me this fate
    I want to let go of all of this hate.
    I yell and scream, I beg and plead.
    Don't let me feel this sadness and need.
    Stop this voice who is yelling in my ear
    I don't want to deal with this inner fear.
    How can she be the mother I love?
    Lord please help me from up above.
    She leaves this world in dispair
    I can't help but think; life's not fair
    Why did she do this to me?
    Why coudn't she be the mother I need?
    I could've been the best son for her
    I still can be a doctor or a lawyer
    After so long of being away
    Now I catch myself totally afraid.
    God Please help me, I feel I can't breathe
    Why did she leave me? Please bring her back to me!!!
    I need her, I loved her, she was my all.
    Why couldn't she be there when I fall
    Give me one more chance, just one more
    Life could be so much better, I want her to adore.
    I rip at my life and material things
    There could've been something: love, I could bring
    I love you, my mother, regardless of our past
    No matter what anger I have..it won't last.
    Give me your arms mother
    I promise not to be a bother.
    I could love everyone as one
    and be with you when the day is done.
    Please Come Back I need you til today
    Please don't leave me in this empty way.

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    Deacon5 commented on Foster Child's Poem

    10-18-2009

    I have three kids that are in foster care at this moment,you poem make me want to do everything that I can to get them back into my life.Not that I didn't before, but you've made me think of how they feel and I promise to get them back!

    ptrbltbtch

    12/07/2009

    I wish you all the best of luck. I've known many foster children and I always pray that they have something to do with their original families.

    Photojan12 commented on Foster Child's Poem

    09-16-2009

    This is so impressive. You capture the heart and pain of the abandoned child. If this happened to you I hope you have found comfort

    ptrbltbtch

    09/17/2009

    thank you. this did not happen to me but it has happened to someone whom I've never met, but somebody told me about.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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