Freudian Stream

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I tingle in the vicinity of dreams. The very nature of that velvet realm of possibility instills within me a nostalgic sense of past as well as present. I am warped, an immutable essence, an entity in which no mortal cages incapacitate its potential. Free is the wild mind. May the fires of knowledge inundate its wrinkled labyrinths.

Freudian Stream

There is a green stream which runs
through my heart like a webbed root
fresh and hot into my mind’s eye at night
when the owls freakishly glare with yellow light
bouncing into the secrecy of immortality;  I
finally pierce the sieve of semi awareness.
In the flighty, senseless fire of dream’s vulgarity


These veins quiver, and when I blink
I become a Cyclops eye, an omniscient fly
Spying the tadpole in the stream of this dry mind,
wriggling towards grander seas, I falter
A rabid dog, gulping away from water,
and the ethereal portal which caught,
wedged between the misery of Time and Death,
jolts misery back above the waves,
and there is only one “I” to blame
when nostalgia breathes from lung to heart
whipping tendrils of innocence violently apart


The Freudian eclipse
Turned his boon to art


The river of pseudo wakefulness lingers
on the Freudian breeze, maladroit and at unease.
These fingers pressed with ink will not appease,
the wild stitch, on which the sap that slowly runs
down flesh and fervor, the voyeur moon that grunts
A blunt dissatisfaction with which all species
of writer must grapple, patiently biting his sour apple
by candlelight in a munificent shawl
wrapped in comfort, maimed with gall


Sitting here by my windowpane, imbibing the sins
tangled in the stoic wind where art begins
and sad poets suck on gin, and their tired hands
bleed irritations, reflective as oxidized tin
a rainbow of phantasms stuck as a fin
in the elderly wrinkles of half-worn sleep
where we count sheep, count and
finally fall deep

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Qualin commented on Freudian Stream

07-30-2009

PROB. A 10 HOW WOULD I KNOW DONT BE OFFED=NDED BY MY 9

Qualin commented on Freudian Stream

07-30-2009

OVER MY HEAD ..BUT THAT ISN'T A VERY HARD TASK..I'M STILL A JACK AND JILL I WOULD HAVE TO HAVE MY DICTIONARY AT HAND BUT WHAT I DID UNDERSTAND I LIKE IT...QUALIN

hoth2o commented on Freudian Stream

07-10-2009

Whew! lot said there, lotta emotion laid bare. Truth is what it is and I loved this!!

Crush commented on Freudian Stream

07-08-2009

i must say that i do not understand this poem...however, MANY lines stand out as pure, pure genius. "wedged between the misery of Time and Death". that is tremendous ! "Where owls "etc....is amazing. i loved this even though i don't understand it completely. the title offers a hint. i will definitely read more from you right now. i need to see more, thank u.

crazygirl77

07/09/2009

My poetry is highly allegorical. Interpret it as you wish, although, this particular piece is about the delirium between sleep and consciousness. At the same time, it contains personal meanings which I usually will not divulge to readers.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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My Random Thoughts (no structure here) 3
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Mind 1
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Words... 2
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The Baggage 1
Breakfast Thought 0
Existence vs Resistance 1
Alone with Death 0
The Maggot of Love 0
The Wall and I 0
The Rain 0
Trail of the Snail 0
Break 1
Gardenia 3
Violet Eyes 0
Coco_Nut 1
Midnight Sin 2
Moonlight 3
LOVE 4
“Making Love to a Reflection” 8
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Undone 3
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