The Struggle

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    The Struggle
    I have sowed a field of flowers divine
    I have drunk the purest drops of wine
    Tasting every single tear I weep
    I long for treasures I dare not keep

    Within that field of opium lies
    Tempting is the smell of human disguise
    While the morning dove pays its fees in its song
    I shall not expose my weary soul for long

    Looking upon the piercing blue blanket way high
    A solid white flag flies against an ebony sky
    Drowning in the stench
    Drowning in the lie
    All i can ever ask is why

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    errizy commented on The Struggle

    01-24-2009

    your poems are really visceral, no idea why you are receiving low ratings,,,,im trying to change that,,,keep it up, never listen to ignorance
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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