Frozen

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    Frozen
    Frozen is where I stand, I don't know what to feel with in.

    Unbreakable ice coats my heart.

    At this point I want it torn apart.

    Struggling with my emotions, trying so hard to heal.

    I want to know what is still real.

    I want the truth.

    I want to hear it from you.

    Tell me please so I can learn to feel.

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    spbsdude commented on Frozen

    10-15-2009

    All of the poems I have read in this batch show great promise for such a young poet. Remember to write with specificity, in other words, be very descriptive and specific in what you say and write in a way such that your voice is heard. Keep up the good work.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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