Shit Faced

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    Shit Faced
    Crack cocaine and marijuana dreams.

    Why not?

    My life is falling apart at the seams.

    Get me some whiskey and LSD.

    Keep your holy shit away from me.

    I’ll shoot it up and drink it down, listenin’ to those Wicked Clowns.

    Yeah, I’m shit faced, fucked up, down, sideways and all around.

    I did this all for you, do me a favor and dig a six foot hole in the ground.

    Yeah, look at your precious child now.

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    Viper89 commented on Shit Faced

    12-21-2010

    sad that you feel that way. it seems that you need to have a long sit down with you parents and have a nice long talk about your feelings. good poem by the way!
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    spbsdude commented on Shit Faced

    10-15-2009

    As a parent of three children, and grand parent of four, I can hear a cry for help. But after reading the comments I realize tha this is a cry against drug abuse. It may be mockery, but it is difficult to read the mockery in the words. Something needs to be included to let the reader know that you are mocking drug abuse. Mockery can be a very useful tool when used appropiately. Still the anger comes out, and it is a very expressive poem. You seem on the edge of saying something profound in all of the poems I have read, but seem to hold back just a little. Let yourself go. Begin the poem with what you have here and then launch into what it did to your family. You have so much to say it sounds like, so say it and let your soul bleed unto the page.
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    byjax commented on Shit Faced

    06-05-2009

    OK, OK get a hold of yourself. What is this? Rebellion? Bear in mind that Rebellion is not just AGAINST everything, it is also FOR something... this sentiment is only AGAINST.
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    ChaoticStorm

    06/10/2009

    This is not rebellion actually. Its the truth. However, it is not against anything at all.. or for it.. I hate crack cocaine to be quite honest. It ruined my family and is part of the reason I wrote this. Its not rebellion so to speak its anger and mockery.

    Mendingz commented on Shit Faced

    06-01-2009

    lmao i cant help but laugh when i read this cuz of the lsd for somereason hahaaa XD..god dammit that was to short...needed 100 characters....haha
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    VamireEd commented on Shit Faced

    04-23-2009

    it is good.i guest this is the way she feels.
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