A Chance?

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    A Chance?

    A Chance?

    Open up.

    Let me in.

    Let me hear you from within.

    Speak to me with your soul..

    Touch me with your heart..

    and Kiss me with your love.

    Don’t be cold.

    Don’t lock me out.

    Don’t make me wait..

    Or make me cry.

    Give me a hand that I may hold..

    A shoulder I may lean on..

    and A love that won’t pass me by.

    All I’m asking for is a chance.

     

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on A Chance?

    03-03-2012

    I think this poem is real, with all the right questions, it is cleverly written.

    Viper89 commented on A Chance?

    12-21-2010

    true true all we all need are chances. Amen to that Poem. 10 from me!!!

    spbsdude commented on A Chance?

    10-15-2009

    A nice short poem that shows promise. All any of us can ask for is a chance. Nice job.

    optimistic commented on A Chance?

    06-10-2009

    I like this poem I wish it were a little bit more it sounded like you had more to say or maybe not good form written across the page.

    hdmac commented on A Chance?

    06-10-2009

    ...Be careful when you open up youself like this. Your poetry is expressing all your deep feelings...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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