Fun Interrupted

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    Fun Interrupted
    It is fun to see what others claim do not exist.

    I reveal in madness that claim many and releases few, or so I'm told by the men in white coats.

    But the others shimmering, etherial.

    They show me paths, paths the exist.

    I travel one as we speak.

    I nearr its end.

    What will I see? What will I have?

    Peace at last.

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    ccslim commented on Fun Interrupted

    05-18-2009

    Interesting and provoking by content.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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